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Terza Rima

Another interlocking rhyme for the masochists.
Terza Rima is a rhyme scheme -- as opposed to a strict form -- which involves interlocking rhymes, written in iambic tercets (three-line stanzas). The rhyme scheme is aba bcb cdc ded (and so forth) for as long as you want to continue. Although no specific line length is required, most terza rima poems in English are written in iambic pentameter. If other line lengths are used, such as tetrameter, all lines must be in that length.

Most terza rimas end with a rhyming couplet, like a sonnet.

For example:

The letters heaved from dark primordial stew
To rest exhausted on unwritten sand
Unwitting in their gasping curlicue

His gaze was caught, and with his blackened hand
Commanded them to form phonetic tunes
A runic echo through a songless land

Though doves may cry and lovers sing to moons
The crooning melts in bland and soulless mass
To asinine receivers it communes

But master craftsmen see through coloured glass
And pass through ages gone and yet to be
An energy and vision none surpass

You spend your years pretending poetry
Yet he has taken words and set them free

 

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Jones, Paganinifrom Hyde in Cheshire
385 posts

on Jul. 11 2007


Ah - you beat me to it

(I would, if I had a thing about labels, call your example a Terza Rima Sonnet as it has the tail and has 14 lines. Picky or what?)

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Jones, Paganinifrom Hyde in Cheshire
385 posts

on Jul. 11 2007


A quick note on rhyming schemes in terza rima while I have it in mind -
There are two ways to handle it. The first is as Leanne proposes ie ending in a couplet:

     aba bcb cdc ded (etc.) ee

The other option is to make the end come back to the beginning so that each stanza has 3 lines, and each rhyme is used 3 times:

     aba bcb cdc ded (etc.) eae

The second is my personal preference (I like the symmetry and the 'threeness of things') except if I am intending to write a sonnet, but of course both forms are equally valid.

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Leanne Hansonfrom Just west of the lounge room
Associate, 3708 posts

on Jul. 11 2007


For the record, I'm less keen on the sonnet close also -- a friend of mine is a freak for it though, so this was for him.  Sometimes poetry is the best way to shut people up

 

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