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Clogyrnach

You might have noticed I'm putting a lot of my favourite forms up here first   I love these things.

The clogyrnach is a Welsh six-line stanza form -- it can either be a single stanza poem or you can join them together to make something much longer.  

There are only two rhymes per stanza (though if you're making a longer poem, you can change rhymes as long as it's the same pattern).  The lines have a syllable count of 8-8-5-5-3-3, and the rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-b-a -- technically, it looks like this:

 

x x x x x x a

x x x x x x a

x x x x b

x x x x b

x x b

x x a

 

If you want to, you can actually join the last two lines together to make one six-syllable line, but it's important to keep the rhymes in the same place, so if you do that your last line will have the b rhyme in the middle:

 x x x x x x a

x x x x x x a

x x x x b

x x x x b

x x b x x a


Personally I like the effect of the two short lines to end, but it's purely an individual choice. 

 

Home

The Southern Cross will guide you home
To eucalypts in sacred foam
Bright coral crowns and
Soft shell-strewn white sand
Silent land
Wrapped in foam 

(from Odd Verse Effects)

 

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Jones, Paganinifrom Hyde in Cheshire
385 posts

on June 5 2007


Don't know who wrote the following, but I have a fondness for a form description written in that actual form. In fact maybe we should make a challenge of it! Some would be easy, eg an essay about an essay. Others such as a haiku about a haiku could be pretty challenging.

A quantitative Welsh verse form,
The clog-ir-nach defines the norm:
Three couplets that rhyme,
Syllables count time,
Rhymes should climb
And conform.

Yours is better poetry by far of course!

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Laurie Blumfrom Cloud 9
Associate, 2074 posts

on June 5 2007


Leanne your descriptions are excellent and make it easier for me to understand the forms. I think I will attempt a clogyrnach next! Wish me luck.

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Leanne Hansonfrom Just west of the lounge room
Associate, 3708 posts

on June 5 2007


Nice one Pags!  I tend to like poetry about poetry also -- it's not usually all that hard to do, but it's tremendously good fun and does make you think about the form.
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Laurie Blumfrom Cloud 9
Associate, 2074 posts

on June 6 2007


Does a clogyrnach need to have a particular theme? Or can it be about anything?

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Leanne Hansonfrom Just west of the lounge room
Associate, 3708 posts

on June 6 2007


No poems really have to have a particular theme.  Some suit certain themes better than others but part of my job as I see it is subversion of the expected use of forms, because I'm evil.

I use clogyrnachs like limericks sometimes... they're good fun... but I have a couple of friends who wrote a whole eight page fantasy story using them. 

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