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The Burning Question Amongst Short Poets...

5-7-5
2 / 11%
3-5-3
1 / 5%
What?
1 / 5%
Onji and syllables aren't compatible, the end is what matters
10 / 55%
How can I possibly reach the top shelf without a stool?
4 / 22%

18 votes up to now

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Stephan Ansteyfrom Lowell, MA
Associate, 6232 posts

on Feb. 10 2007


I'm far more concerned with theme, tense and revelation than i am with syllables. but that's just me.


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Rhiannon Jones
88 posts

on Feb. 11 2007


Well, personally, I'm into syllables. Years of childhood piano lessons with the metronome ticking in that threatening way....? or maybe it was mom and the nursery rhymes. So far, I've not managed to say what I want to say in 3-5-3...but admire those who can.
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Stephan Ansteyfrom Lowell, MA
Associate, 6232 posts

inspired from Rhiannon Jones on Jan. 28 2008


Rhiannon Jones:

You know, i agree too -- it is so hard to do 3-5-3. I envy those that can. 

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Jones, Paganinifrom Hyde in Cheshire
385 posts

on Jan. 29 2008


eleven
syllables can be
insuffic

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Stephan Ansteyfrom Lowell, MA
Associate, 6232 posts

inspired from Pags on Jan. 29 2008


don't tell me
about syllables
just write, fool

mustard seed
seems so very small
but it's not

dont' tell me
about parables
i don't care

mustard seed
carried on spring breeze
falls later

don't tell me
about mustard seeds
just write, fool

Testy Von Tester

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on Feb. 9 2007

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